WALT entertain the reader - Diamantes are diamond-shaped poems ‘that contrast’ two nouns.
Success Criteria:
Step 1: Think of two nouns that are complete opposite of each other. Write one on Line 1 and the other on Line 7.
Step 2: On Line 2, write two adjectives that describe the noun on Line 1.
Step 3: On Line 3, write three “-ing” words (verbs) that relate to Line 1.
Step 4: On Line 4, write a short phrase about line 1 and line 7.
Step 5: On Line 5, write three “-ing” words (verbs) that relate to Line 7
Step 6: On Line 6, write two adjectives that describe the noun on Line 7.
Step 7: On Line 7 you will have your noun that you thought of in Step 1.
Winter
Frosty, bright
Skiing, snowball fighting, sledding
Icicles and snowflakes, family holidays
Swimming, suntanning, sweltering
Hot, sunny
Summer
Now have a go at writing your own diamante poem.
wolf
Hunter, killer
Searching, sneaking, leaping
Howling at night....waiting for prey
Hunting, eating, chasing
Striped, swift
Tiger
Panda
Fat, lazy
Consuming, sleeping, climbing
Eating all day … hibernating in winter
Fighting, devouring, attacking
Huge, strong
bear
I like your diamante poems. Keep up the good work Leo. (-:
ReplyDeleteI like the detail I like how you said "consuming"
ReplyDeleteI like the way how you put detail in your Diamante Poem about the Animal.
ReplyDeleteI really like you poem leo it's really i like the 2nd one because you put alot of detail in i.
ReplyDeleteWOW Leo i like the detail in the diamante pomes.(:
ReplyDeleteWow Leo I like all your added detail.
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have put a lot of work into it.
I hope that you will keep up the good work.
IT is good to see all your hared work has been put to good use. :)
Well done Leo I like how you you explained how to do a poem like that. I like all of the poem because you added a lot of detail and fun Ideas. I don't agree with the panda one with the LAZY and Fat but apart from that it was good. Keep up the great work Leo!
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